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Monday, April 28, 2014
I'm A... Hot Air Balloon that Could Go to Space!
(Story contributed by Sophia P. in response toTHIS)
Hi this is Madison and Tamzin. We are from West Earlham Junior School and we loved your comment because it was so heart warming. Also you were true about everything. Do you like poetry because you sound like a poet?
I think being happy is one of the best things in the world, because i allways say " Don't worry if you have a really good freind like i have you are alright.Its a really good way to wipe away your problem.
Hi,we are Natanya and Paige. We are from Inaburra School,Sydney Australia. We really like your story and we also think that happiness should always be in your heart. Would there be any time that you had to find happiness? In a book we read at school the character was so lonely she had to go and find happiness. Have you heard of any times like that?
Hi, our names are Aliza & Abby from Inaburra school. We think that what you said is true and happiness is something that is in you. We thought that your story was wonderful. We loved it but maybe it could be a little bit longer.We also think that you will learn lots more about it and will do well. We learnt it by reading a book and watch a movie called Because Of Winn-Dixie. Have you read this book? Do you have happiness inside you? From Aliza & Abby
hi it is Sophia Alexander thank you for being so sweet. I can find happiness when i have fun and have someone to talk to and someone sweet just like you bbbbbbyyyyyeeeee
hi it is Sophia Rod and Molly I love reading my favorite book is ready Freddy or Fly guy do you know those books and what is your favorite books both of you
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Hi this is Madison and Tamzin. We are from West Earlham Junior School and we loved your comment because it was so heart warming. Also you were true about everything. Do you like poetry because you sound like a poet?
I think being happy is one of the best things in the world, because i allways say " Don't worry if you have a really good freind like i have you are alright.Its a really good way to wipe away your problem.
Hi we agree with what you said. It is true that all you need for happiness is freinds or family.
Hi,we are Natanya and Paige. We are from Inaburra School,Sydney Australia. We really like your story and we also think that happiness should always be in your heart. Would there be any time that you had to find happiness? In a book we read at school the character was so lonely she had to go and find happiness. Have you heard of any times like that?
Hi Sophia P. My name is Alexander. I go to Inaburra in Australia. I agree with you that hapiness is always in your heart.
Except don't you think you can find the happiness in your heart another way that isn't a laugh?
Hi, our names are Aliza & Abby from Inaburra school. We think that what you said is true and happiness is something that is in you. We thought that your story was wonderful. We loved it but maybe it could be a little bit longer.We also think that you will learn lots more about it and will do well. We learnt it by reading a book and watch a movie called Because Of Winn-Dixie. Have you read this book? Do you have happiness inside you?
From Aliza & Abby
Hello our names are Rod and Molly do you like reading?
hi it is Sophia Alexander thank you
for being so sweet. I can find happiness when i have fun and have someone to talk to and someone sweet just like you bbbbbbyyyyyeeeee
hi it is Sophia Rod and Molly
I love reading my favorite book is
ready Freddy or Fly guy do you know
those books and what is your favorite books both of you
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